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Nothing's changed, we're still alone and while
crows fly high, we stand our ground.
The sky is black and the door is open,
but can we choose to make it through?

Save your strength for now,
we'll be fine, my love, just wait
And I know that's what you hate,

But soon we'll be inside,
the room is lit and we won't say goodbye
to this life we've made.

Pull together, don't be scared
Though the night is dark as the wind grows strong
The bond we have is all we'll need to
fly away from this wretched place.

Spread your wings for now,
imagine the skies
and so, soon we will rise.

In a world where humans race,
all power-hungry and selfish,
we have made our mark.

We're coming close, don't be alarmed.
I'm here with you, you won't be harmed
by the haunting birds who'll be no more
as we slip past the dark.

Into that room, we'll walk again
as the children laugh and the adults grin
Home once more, we'll laugh and tell
of the journeys that we've made.

I'll get you out,
I'll get you out

So while we hear those birds crow loudly,
I'll talk to you and kiss your face.
'No, don't close your eyes, my darling
we're almost there...
We're almost there.'
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I'm not sure where this came from in my extremely peculiar brain, to be honest with you. :meow: But I hope you like it, regardless! Please let me know what you think.
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:iconwingz69:
=WiNGz69 Feb 10, 2013  Student Writer
This hit the spot, so refreshing. Like that long needed lemonade on a hot summer day. Well done :)
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~SourAir Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! :)
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=TheWritingDragon Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ooooh neat!!! :love: I really like it! I like how it didn't rhyme in all the stanzas but didn't have to and it flowed perfectly ;)
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~SourAir Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aww thanks!! :heart: :D
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=TheWritingDragon Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome!
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~Cibian Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Very beautiful!
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~SourAir Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! :)
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~ElektrikDawn Feb 4, 2013  Student Writer
This is inspiring! (: The message is really heart warming, I felt safer when I finished reading it. ^-^
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~SourAir Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! I'm really glad it could make an impact! :D
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:iconebonywolf10:
good job! the stanzas could be a bit more...organized I guess?

:icondragonwant: But this is still wonderful! I love the impact this has, the vision you are trying to create.
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