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If only our lives
could be like the hills;
Rolling on forever
with peace and simple beauty.

If only our hearts
could be like the stars;
twinkling and shining
as a beacon to all.

If only our minds
could be like a lily;
sweet and pure white
among a rainbow of colors.

If only our hands
could be like a blank paper;
washed of the blood
from all the sins we've committed.
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Sorry for the lack of rhythm, rhyme, etc., I wrote this late yesterday.. XD
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~tommyboywood Jan 22, 2013  Professional Writer
yeah... if only
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~SourAir Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
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~tommyboywood Jan 22, 2013  Professional Writer
lol
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~tommyboywood Dec 23, 2012  Professional Writer
Nice. With just a few minor tweaks even better
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~SourAir Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :) I wrote this pretty quickly, so there a bunch of things I could fix, haha.
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*Oseltamivir Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is amazing. Almost made me cry because it's so beautiful.
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~SourAir Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much~! ^^ :huggle:
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*Oseltamivir Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome :)
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All life is one
Yet experienced subjectively
You see eternity
Yet cling to your shadow

Practise Being
Let go
Follow the vision
Of rolling hills
Of unwashed hands

Release of attachment
Is water to your vision

It will happean

Then you will see all life is one and experienced subjectively
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~SourAir Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow... :wow: That was amazing. Thank you.
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