You said you would come,
so why aren't you here?
You walked out of my life,
you disappeared.
I have so much to tell you
since I saw you last.
Don't you want to hear
all about my new class?
How I'm making new friends,
how I'm learning new things?
How everyone jumps up
when the dismissal bell rings?
I'm waiting here still,
staring out the window
of the room where we once sat
and spent the day watching videos.
My Sesame Street doll
sits at my side.
It's the one you gave me,
once upon a time.
My old blue blanket
sits around my shoulders
as I remember us playing,
until we got older.
The sun has long set
upon the great times
of sledding and monsters
and small metal slides.
The slam of a car door
breaks me out of my daydream.
I spring up towards the window,
and I'm met with a gleam.
A smile graces my face
as I jump up off the floor.
I run to the entrance
as you walk toward the door.
"Greetings and salutations
to you, good sir!"
"Calm down," you smile,
and things are as they were.
Honestly, this is a very poem and had a good rhyme scheme. The only thing I have a problem with is that some of the stanzas are much wordier than others and sometimes, you use slant rhymes that dont go together very well, but that's just me.
Over all, this a a very good poem and I enjoyed reading it.
Yeah...
No problem! I loved it!
Thank you twitter for featuring this wonderful piece of literature!
Wait, Twitter? XD
and no joke. dA tweeted it under literature a while back.