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I am so fed up.

It's the last period of the day, and I just want to go home.

Just a few more minutes...

Can't he please wait just a few more minutes to keep talking?

Because, to be honest, I'm really tired of hearing him speak.

"Sis!" he calls in a not-so-very-discreet whisper across the room, earning him glares from other people around him.

The girl he called to turns around in her seat and faces him, though she is clearly not his sister. There is a perplexed smile on her face as she tries to decode his frantic hand gestures. She rolls her eyes as if this was a normal occurrence to her (which it probably was) and continues with what she was doing a few minutes ago.

The boy doesn't give up, though.

He continues to call "Sis! Sis!" loudly to the girl that obviously is not related to him at all.

By the time he reaches his sixth call, I turn to give him my signature annoyed glare.

"Do you mind?" I say indignantly, "Unlike you, some people actually want to attend school for the purpose for which it was created. Can't you wait until later to talk to her?"

He stares at me, pretending to be offended though it's clear that he doesn't care about what I said. There is a mischievous smile on his face.

"You don't know what it's like to have a sister," he declares, almost in a boasting way.

I pause, and for a moment, I am rendered speechless.

"You're right," I respond slowly, "I don't."

He just smiles.
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Because not all of your family has to be related to you.

Based off a conversation I had during class one day. I'm not sure why I decided to write it down, but I did. So here you go. I hope you enjoyed it.
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~dashita-tichou Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm the middle child in a set of three girls and they both get on my nerves SO much everyday... *shrugs* Well, maybe not EVERY day... I'm in marching band and my section leader was a lot like a big brother to me, always teasing me but pushing me to do my best a the same time. I used to have real confidence issues too, I cried after every performance and he was there with a hug and got me to stop crying. So I definitely get the whole not all of your family is related to you thing. This was cute.
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~SourAir Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, that's really sweet! :) I used to have someone like that in my life, too. Thank you for the comment, I'm really glad that you liked this!
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this really interested me. normally i find it difficult to read stuff, but this drew me in. i was quite interested to see who's point of view it was coming from and what would happen next, and it seemed like something that was legitimate - like the way people reacted and stuff.
nicely done.
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~SourAir Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it :)
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=TheWritingDragon Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:icondragonkekeplz: this is so randomly funny! :XD: weird stuff has happened to me like this too...
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~SourAir Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, thanks!
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~PearlsCat Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love the simplicity of this. There's something more to the story, but that doesn't necessarily mean it needed to be written. This is good, and I'm glad you found something interesting enough in your life to write about. It's not often we get to take life experiences and make them into a story. :)
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~SourAir Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! :) That was the thing I kept in mind as I wrote it, and I'm glad that people could understand there was a deeper meaning to the story. :)
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!ZahilaraBennett Jan 13, 2013  Student Writer
This is amazing. I love it.
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